“Wow” I said breathlessly. There it was. The creature I had been searching for all of my life (12 years). The White Octopus. It is a very shy, and very gentle creature. BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP. And there I am. Laying in bed. It was all just a dream. It was Saturday and I had piano lessons. Springing out of bed, I rush to get ready. My mom beeps at me in the car and yells “Hurry up! We’re going to be late!” I hope in her car and off we go. Maybe someday that dream will be my reality!
Greetings from Australia Emily. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge. It’s not easy to create a coherent text using random words. I was impressed by your use of sentences of different lengths, and by your careful word choices. Remember to re-read, and edit your text for punctuation, and meaning (or ask a friend to help you) before you publish. 🙏😊
Nice one me!