Week #7

*ALERT* FOREST FIRE IN YOUR AREA. YOU MUST EVACUATE BY 6PM!

“Great” thought Jack. “This is just what we need, another forest fire.” “Well, we do live in Colorado” reminded Jacks mother. “Oh, I forgot” said Jack sarcastically. They were loading things (most of it was the more important stuff) into the car to send to Jacks grandparents’.That is where they were going to stay during the evacuation. Jack decided to join the drive to his grandparents house. On the way there, he saw a firefighter on the side of the road. “Wow,” thought Jack. “He is very brave!”

One thought on “Week #7

  1. I like your writing so much! It’s so smooth, concise and easy to read! You are so good at capturing the key points to make a scene vivid.

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